Maddy is someone I look up to. Not only do I look up to her because she is almost 6 feet tall, but because she is a good person and a good friend. If one of her friends is having a rough day Maddy is usually there offering them help and understanding. It might be hard to imagine Maddy as a very bossy 2 year old she used to be since she has changed so much. The first thing I notice about her other than her height, is her shoulder length red/brown hair and her freckles. I also notice that she always seems to be smiling and laughing. Wherever she smiles her colorful braces show over her white teeth. A lot of the time you can't help smiling back at her. She has a great fun to be around attitude. Maddy can joke around and be silly with her friends. At the same time she is a very hard working student. Did I mention she is a straight A student? Whenever I get off track during class she helps me get back on. Maddy is also pretty athletic. Doing volleyball and basketball and being good at both sports. I don't know how Maddy squeezes everything she does into her day because she is also a musician. She plays in jazz band and is a really great trumpet player. Maddy is a very good friend and a good role model. I don't know what I would do without her.
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ReplyDeleteWow! good job. I like the part about how you lookup to her, not only cause her hight though. If i didn't know maddy i would be able to tell she is a awesome person and friend.
ReplyDeleteI think over half the school looksup to Maddy because she is 6 feet tall. I notice hre freckles first too! She is a good sports role model because of her asthma. You should have said she will always give hugs, or will comfort you when your sad also. But I like your descriptoin of her. :)
ReplyDeletei couldn't imagine maddy as a bossy 2 year old eather. that would be fuuuny to see her all bossy :). maddy does do a lot. i really like it. good job :).
ReplyDeleteHannah I think you did a really good job describing Maddy. When I read it I can really picture her because there was so much detail in your writing. I like how you mentioned her face, the freckles, hair and even braces. I can tell her personality because you told us everything she does, sports, music. And I think you did a really good job on the picture of her.
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